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April 12

The Waking Moments

By Ryan Hale

April 8th 2005

 

Perched, precariously on the edge of my nightstand,

The embodiment of limitless suffering and despair,

Red LED lights displaying to my horror…

6:55am

 

 

The disquieting terror of the piercing alarm,

Automated disruption of my pleasant torpor,

In five…

But this reality is beclouded by the siren’s call of slumber…

 

 

The inescapable destined hour,

7:00am.

Discharging decibels…

 Spark to flame igniting into rage!

 

 

Inflamed!

Seeking to quell the wrathful blaring,

My fist collides with the source of my fury!

I have 10 minutes respite...

12:37 PM | Blog it | Poetry

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Maggie Sue Sinwrote:
Wow. That feels like my mornings 5 days a week. Beautifuly done.
Hugs
 Mnadee.C
May 18
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NightAngel297 wrote:
That's a pretty awsome poem.. I also wanted to comment on the fact that your a pretty awsome artist and you do a terrific job.. And your art will go places and far..Continue the great work..Your a great person and awsome friend..Luv ya Buddy!!!!!!!!
June 29
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Michelle-the-Tea-Freak wrote:
Hey Ryan! Nice artwork! I'll have to commission you to do my back piece!
Lotsa luv hun,
Michelle
June 27

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